Sunday, July 13, 2008

25 words: Stare and Wonder



Hungry morning.
I look out my window yearning.
I see a sky offering food for my soul.
I stare. I wonder.

How did it know?

--me liz strauss, letting me be

16 Comments:

Anonymous Julie Isaac said...

Wow!

Powerful little poem.

I feel the same way
when I look out my window
and see the water
constantly changing color

as a parade of boats passes by
I hear a lone seagull cry
and my heart answers

12:14 AM, July 14, 2008  
Blogger easywriter said...

Food for the soul. A wonderful thought! Blue Popsicles? Cotton Candy and Lemon Drops? What a great way to start your day!

1:15 AM, July 14, 2008  
Blogger gregory said...

sky and i
same sigh
sometimes a cry

wondering why we are so far apart

6:35 AM, July 14, 2008  
Blogger Dr.John said...

Lovely little poem. Wish I had started the day with it.

6:28 PM, July 14, 2008  
Blogger ME Strauss said...

Hi Julie,
What a compliment to receive such a comment in response to what I wrote!

9:20 PM, July 14, 2008  
Blogger ME Strauss said...

Hi Easy!
I'm enjoying the images of blue popsicles and cotton candy! Thank you for those!

9:21 PM, July 14, 2008  
Blogger ME Strauss said...

Gregory,
You're not as far as you're thinking.
Listen harder while you're looking.

9:22 PM, July 14, 2008  
Blogger ME Strauss said...

Dr. John!
You made my day by saying that!

9:22 PM, July 14, 2008  
Blogger Nikki said...

hello me strauss...nice to find a fellow storyteller. After all,there are little stories everywhere, even in a blue popsicle.

1:59 PM, July 15, 2008  
Blogger ME Strauss said...

Hi Nikki!
Everyone calls me "Liz." Come on in! Great to meet you. :)

5:16 PM, July 15, 2008  
Blogger dsnake1 said...

what a wonderful poem, Liz.

every morning, i am always hungry, looking for my daily fix of tea and bread/noodles. i am grateful for that. :)

10:51 AM, July 20, 2008  
Blogger ME Strauss said...

Hi dsnake,
Every morning, I know what you mean. This comment will make me think of you!

12:26 PM, July 21, 2008  
Anonymous 宿迁掼蛋网宿迁擦枪 棋牌游戏中心 said...

I thought I was a relatively smart people who read your work I know that I am not!

7:43 AM, January 05, 2009  
Blogger ME Strauss said...

I'm not sure what you're saying. But I'm sure you're as smart as anyone. :)

7:40 AM, January 06, 2009  
Anonymous Carl said...

Two lists to live by: "absolutely MUST have in life" and "absolutely NOT OK".

Must have: 20 laughs per day, fun challenges, 25 words (smile)

1:11 PM, April 10, 2009  
Blogger ME Strauss said...

Thank you, Carl!
I so agree!

10:31 PM, April 10, 2009  

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