Thursday, July 13, 2006

The View

my eyes
filled
with my response
following
a path
of two drops
that wash
away fearful feelings
to place a smile
on my
self-image


your eyes
in my head
change the view

to the poet at knifegunpen

−me strauss Letting me be

4 Comments:

Anonymous Robert Bruce said...

Thanks much Liz.

I guess our trials are similar and universal. No matter how bad, we're never alone.

You take care my friend.

1:27 AM, July 13, 2006  
Blogger ME Strauss said...

Robert,
Thank you for letting me borrow the ketchup and a smile.
I'm feeling like the sunshine. Here today and maybe tomorrow. That's all that I can ask for. :)

6:11 AM, July 13, 2006  
Blogger Trée said...

"your eyes
in my head
change the view"

Oh my Liz, I do like this turn of phrase. I'll be thinking about this one all day long. I'm feeling a spark of inspiration. :-)

11:42 AM, July 13, 2006  
Blogger ME Strauss said...

Hi Trée,
I like that turn too. I'll look to what you come up with. Do tell me when you have it.

11:43 AM, July 13, 2006  

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