Thursday, July 13, 2006

The View

my eyes
filled
with my response
following
a path
of two drops
that wash
away fearful feelings
to place a smile
on my
self-image


your eyes
in my head
change the view

to the poet at knifegunpen

−me strauss Letting me be

4 comments:

Robert Bruce said...

Thanks much Liz.

I guess our trials are similar and universal. No matter how bad, we're never alone.

You take care my friend.

ME Strauss said...

Robert,
Thank you for letting me borrow the ketchup and a smile.
I'm feeling like the sunshine. Here today and maybe tomorrow. That's all that I can ask for. :)

Trée said...

"your eyes
in my head
change the view"

Oh my Liz, I do like this turn of phrase. I'll be thinking about this one all day long. I'm feeling a spark of inspiration. :-)

ME Strauss said...

Hi Trée,
I like that turn too. I'll look to what you come up with. Do tell me when you have it.