Thursday, November 17, 2005

I Was You


Once my soul screamed truth
My blood thundered challenge
My eyes climbed rainbows
I tasted heartbreak
Once
I was you
Once

—me strauss Letting me be
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6 comments:

  1. Anonymous11:30 PM, November 17, 2005

    Liz- I think we share a soul from another time. The truth silence, challenges are deep, patient rivers, rainbows happen when there are tears in your eyes. GHL very much.

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  2. "ME" Liz Strauss11:34 PM, November 17, 2005

    David,
    What beautiful things you think and say. You have made me change and grow just knowing you. I'm better because of you.
    LHG x10 to the 23

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  3. Anonymous4:41 AM, November 18, 2005

    This leaves me wanting to know the current state of the speaker - dead, or walking dead? In the ground or in the supermarket?

    Were you looking at life in general from the outside, or at childhood, or at hope? Did you see the addressee as unusual in this life?

    I want to understand the narrator, so I guess I relate to the person/people being addressed.

    Fascinating :-)

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  4. "ME" Liz Strauss7:04 AM, November 18, 2005

    HI Cheryl,
    It is interesting how the photo changes the words. The words were written last summer. I found the photo last night.

    smiles,
    liz

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  5. Anonymous8:52 AM, November 18, 2005

    This one is cool..

    Its mysterious.

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  6. "ME" Liz Strauss8:55 AM, November 18, 2005

    Hi Toadmaster.
    Almost seems like Satuday's here!
    Not so mysterious really, just some thoughts on the knee jerk reactions of youth . . . I think.

    :P

    liz

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